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Post by paypuhrplates on Jan 12, 2008 21:47:20 GMT -5
Right so I have this problem. when you write something you start at the beginning, move to conficlts and such then have this great reprise at the end. Indeed...? Well, I've been writing this story (attempting to, at least) and I have a nice beginning and ending but it's the middle that gives me shit. so it's like; "Great beginning 8DD HAPPY TREES WOAH!" "uhhh...stuff happens?...uhhh" "THE END WITH A FLOURISH HAHA! " and when I am writing well, I ramble, a lot. So I think I'm writing too much. I like to describe things, sometimes I think it's a bit much, but then I slim it down and then slim it some more, because things lose relevance, then I end up with a sentence from what used to be a paragraph. This doesn't happen when I'm writing a story with another person, though. They don't even have to contribute anything, they just have to be there and answer a few questions like what names of places should be and stuff. idk oh well, I threw out that story, and I want to make a new one. WHO WANTS TO WRITE IT WITH ME!?
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l u c i d `
Semi-Ch00b
THE Rad Red Ranger
i swear all of this is r e a l but i can't seem to f e e l
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Post by l u c i d ` on Jan 12, 2008 22:07:09 GMT -5
... I LOVE writing stories with people... n.n very much so! However, I fail at writing.. Otherwise I would write with you! Good luck!
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Post by Egyptian Myth on Jan 13, 2008 15:42:46 GMT -5
8DDD OMG, I CAN NEVER FINISH STORIES EITHER. Liek, I'll start one and be uber inspired, and then I'll lose inspiration and just quit and phail. D: But I've never written WITH someone before. I SHALL ASSIST JOO. YUSS. -flails arms excitedly.- <333
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Post by .Jossachu. on Jan 21, 2008 22:34:15 GMT -5
I remember the last time we wrote a story, t'was grand it was.
P.S. It was a shame the Hippo was left behind, so tragic! -snffl-
P.P.S. love your signature picture btw.
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